Monday, April 02, 2007
a story called love...

Chemistry's a subject we learn at school,
But life is the lab in which we put it to use..
The chemistry between a boy and a girl is never wrong,
If the girl loves the boy and the boy's love forever lives on..

But the truth is never revealed until the very end,
When the love dies and there's nothing left but lonely weekends..
Things just seem to have slipped out of reach..
When all along you thought that they were just peachy keen...

At last the realization finally dawns..
That the perfect story was written with a bunch of crayons..
The story was scrawled by a little girl..
Who knew not the truth about this big world..

Do any of us actually know the truth...
Or is it something that we cannot even begin to sleuth..
I think that love is something that cannot be found..
Its something that's way too compound..

Being lucky in love isn't necessarily the only thing..
Keeping things real and bickering..
Its all a part of a story called love..
A story which starts when you find the person who fits u like a glove..


This poem has nothing to do with my life at the moment..but is just a reflection of what I've been thinking about for the past few days...!!! They're pretty much 'random rhymes' just as the label proclaims that the are :)

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32 Comments:
Blogger Devils Advocate had this to say:

u keep changin ur template ..[:O]
though this template is gud the old one was very gud..
b/w did u desighn this template ..

1:14 AM 

Blogger Keshi had this to say:

for me Love sucks.

Keshi.

7:47 AM 

Anonymous shammu had this to say:

"Keeping things real and bickering.."

How True!

Random rhymes u say so? naah... thoughtful lines they are! if i ever try writing a poem i wonder how it wud be?? :D :D

Takecare!

9:41 AM 

Blogger Sincerity had this to say:

Hello! Nice blog! Great template! Did you make it?

I liked the poem! Very thoughtful and fun to read.

Feel free to drop by my end of the net some time. I have two blogs, one for poems and things that inspire me and another for everything else! :)

9:51 AM 

Blogger Rajeev had this to say:

ur thinkin bout love for the past few days!?!? :>
heheh!!
"Being lucky in love isn't necessarily the only thing..
Keeping things real and bickering..
Its all a part of a story called love..
A story which starts when you find the person who fits u like a glove.."
Lovely lines. esp the last one[;)]!!

btw u didnt temme bout the template! :P

Peace & Love
JeeVY

10:13 AM 

Blogger N had this to say:

wow!! i cannot rhyme for nuts :( so jealous!

3:31 PM 

Blogger lemonade had this to say:

@devils advocate
he he..i had to change the entire look of the blog including the name for various reasons..hence the new look.. :)
i liked the old template a lot too..but this is probably a lil more mature..

@kesh
hey..!! lol...m sure we all feel that way at some point :)


@shams
if u ever write a poem im sure that it would a 100 times more sense than mine :)
u seem quite the poet..u should give writing poems a shot :)

@sincerity
thanks..!! :) nice blog u got there :) visit again

@rajeev
i like the last line too..he he

@n
of course u can..u jus haven't tried as yet..!! i was always under the impression that i couldn't write for peanuts...but now look at me..wit a blog n all :) and let only the blog ,m also making some very sad attempts at poetry..!!

and for all those who asked bout the template..!!
the template is actually downloaded from this awesome site called girlie bits but the thing is i redid most of the stuff..such as the title for the main banner...and i made all the side bar banners from scratch..and i also did the coding for the sidebar :)

but i am learning html and css..so i will probably have a free blogger template blog by mid june..!! :) :) m jus waiting for my vaction so that i can plunge into this project with verything i have..so will be looking forward to ur support :)

anyone who wants me to design a template for them..i'll be happy to do it..so keep ur requests coming :)

7:22 PM 

Blogger Pr!ysha had this to say:

Amazin one..Would rather use the word 'cute' for it :P
And yea,am ALSO obsessed with my feet :)

9:49 PM 

Blogger Keshi had this to say:

lol Lemonade..for me that 'some point' is like everyday of my life :):)

Keshi.

6:31 AM 

Blogger gauravbrills had this to say:

Hi Lemonade ...

first of all thanks for a sip in this scorching summer ,also ur abstract imprints as you say somewhere touch to the so called chemistry of love within the two reagents of mankind ...

cheers !

ps] gr8 template ;)

12:32 AM 

Blogger disillusioned darkling had this to say:

gr8 lil template....lemon girl.....

9:20 AM 

Blogger Rajeev had this to say:

Thanx for that Info.
I wud be happy if u could design one for me also :D

hehhehe!

Peace & Love
JeeVY

10:57 AM 

Blogger Michelle had this to say:

wow i really liked it!

8:51 PM 

Blogger Sincerity had this to say:

lemonade: Thanks for visiting! Come by anytime. And Happy Easter... if you celebrate it that is. :)

11:45 AM 

Blogger Shyma Shetty had this to say:

I like teh part bout how you love should fit like a glove. Profound i mus say.

1:00 PM 

Blogger Kulpreet had this to say:

You know the best way to go about love is, not to take it too seriously. Then, only then, it happens... So allow it to unfold itself that way.

Nice mish-mash of thoughts; and a well blended confusion. Now, isn't that love too?

4:49 PM 

Blogger MeMyself_n_I had this to say:

very nice. i can't write poetry for nuts. :-(
and umm like keshi says, for me love sucks (though for me it's only temporary...at least i hope it is!!!).
thanks for visiting my blog! hope you keep visiting. :-)

8:54 PM 

Blogger Hershey had this to say:

good poem...
wish I could write like this...mine are more...morbid or funny

love..ah..its a fickle thing..and its just ..way too over-rated.

1:35 PM 

Blogger N had this to say:

hehe.. blueberry and cream, it was the flavour of the month.. wish i cud attach pics here.. i have one of it :D

7:11 PM 

Blogger shnaggy had this to say:

uhh hullo lemonade.
ahhhhmmmm...ahhhhhhh...
i read your comment from shammu's...whewwww you design templates...that is just what i've been looking all over. i've asked rajeev bout it too. if i may ask one from you, would you mind? tailor made? am i trespassing? pardon me...

and btw, i am more than double your age and i must say that in love...always keep the mystery. without it...it will go stale. take my word for it.

see yah...

7:36 PM 

Blogger shnaggy had this to say:

thank you so very much lemonade!!!

7:54 PM 

Anonymous shamm had this to say:

yepppppyyyyy!!! me was thinkin of askin u abt it, make me some header,black bg :D,hehe,now am begini to love evrythin balck and dark..and if posible let there b somethin like a fairytale collections u know..buterflies..trees flowers...wings angels..blah blah blah :D :D anything... haaa, let it be anything, my ideas wud turn out crazy,so let it be anythin on a black bg, i wonder if i sound like...hmmmm :D :Danyways......... i rest my case, let it be anything.........heeeeeeeeheeeeeeee..takecare.......and thnk u.......

and time for an update na? ;) or busy kya?exams?

10:06 PM 

Blogger M (tread softly upon) had this to say:

Hey...nice template. Thanks for stopping by my blog. You write poetry, and you design templates...I am in awe.

10:42 PM 

Blogger Silvara had this to say:

Yay - ur a genius when it comes to templates...it's awesome :P Love the poem too :D

5:47 AM 

Blogger Keshi had this to say:

I luv luv luv ur profile pic!

Keshi.

6:31 AM 

Blogger Chinku had this to say:

heya baby girl.. I like the way you've put this across.. Have fun thinking it is so much fun you know!! As for being random, you should know that us literature people call it... Stream of Consciousness!!! dont know? Ask Virginia Woolf!!!

4:14 PM 

Blogger lemonade had this to say:

@pyisha..
ha ha..i know that feeling..! lol..and thanks :)

@gaurav
whoa..? is that a compliment..? ;) thanks so much

@disillusioned darkling
thanks a ton :)

@rajeev
oye..mail me and tell me wat ur specifications are..my id's in my sidebar :)

@michelle
thanks mich..! :)

@sincerity
happy easter to u too :)

@shyma
me..?profound..? well thats a first..!

@kulprett
well blended confusion certainly does remind me of love :)

@memyself and i
u have an awesome blog..had so much of fun reading it..! :)

@hershey
yeah..i guess it is way too overrated...

@n
yumm.!!!

@shnaggy
my pleasure :)

@sham
sweeti...sent it u ur id..go chec it out..

@m
i absolutely luurrvve ur blog..im actually quite honoured that u stopped by here :)

@sil
thanks sil..jus tell me wen and i'll start making urs :)

@kesh
he he..love it too.. :)

@chinku
he he..i have to ask..a student of psychology..?!

6:06 PM 

Blogger sham.... had this to say:

me put it upp....run over to my blog .now , now and see it for urself...thnks a ton sweetykutty :)!

8:43 PM 

Blogger Rajeev had this to say:

hey i mailed u the specs!!
Didnt u get them!?!?!?

Peace & love
JeeVY

8:32 PM 

Blogger sushant had this to say:

love ? , whats that.. isn't it extinct?

9:17 PM 

Blogger sharanx182 had this to say:

this template looks beautiful even though i don't like pink too much....that 'questions' one was the one i found most interesting...hehe...and those links there (the disgusting ones) were supposed to disgust people, heehee....

2:30 AM 

Blogger confessing7girl had this to say:

Love the template of ur blog , love the theme as im a girl in my early twenties and i really know what u mean!!! it's soo hard being a girl!!!!!! :D:P

5:36 PM 

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